I got really excited writing this bit. It was a single piece of narrative that needed working out in full before I could dive in.
It runs at the outside edge of what I think people are willing to put up with (I use GoComics.com as a measure of that kind of thing. Folks there are far more ready to complain than you guys here.) and if the story had run any longer, I might have ditched this whole bit and just sent everyone off to bed. As it is, I have a few cartoons in mind for the first night of the Fest that are now pushed back by a couple of weeks.
Exciting. Entertaining. Fun. At least to me. If you guys don’t enjoy it, don’t hesitate to say so. I enjoy your feedback, of course.