When I’m writing this stuff, everyone’s voice and action has to ‘ring true’ to my ear and my brain.
This one rings really well to me. Depending on your idea of who Kelly, Nikki, and Hubris are, it oughtta sound right.
There ya go. A little behind-the-scenes writing observation for ya.
Ah, yes, Hubris does best on wheels somewhere, or like the time he spent the day running downriver on a kayak so he had it all sorted by the time he got to the landing zone and everyone ambushed him.
Expect Hubris to come back mellow and with it all sorted. Heh. Maybe tomorrow. Heh.
Yay! Greg’s being observant! Greg’s being observant! And I don’t know what that means!
Never underestimate the Bob.
call me silly if you want to. but the ‘me time part’ double meaning maked me really chuckle LOUDLY.
You were thinking X-Rated Me Time? Tsk Tsk … LOL
Every Outdoor Fest it chuckle time …
I can see Greg in his office, speaking in different voices, while writing the words.
His wife, outside the door shaking her head like Bernadette in TBBT …
not necessarily nope, but probably close enough. hehe
Most excellent. Bob gets some me time by pretending to let Hubris out the window.
Now … I would have found it funny if Hubris had had a UNICYCLE hidden under his office window, so he could sneak out quickly. LOL
It’s perfect, including Kelly who is foolish enough to think that Hubris could have “me time” in an office!
Now that’s a great Escape, that might involve hospital/doctor bills. Also many artist, including larpers and Cosplayers, have to get into the “Mind” of their characters, to act like them and or draw them like how they act. Its like having multiple personality disorder. Most of my characters are serious tho… I need to draw a care-free and loopy character some day.